Thursday, February 16, 2017

Week 5 Storytelling: Patience

Patience

Author's Note: For this week I read Ancient Egyptian folklore from Egyptian Myth and Legend by Donald Mackenzie; and I was not disappointed with the tales. There was one issue I was unsure about and wanted to address in my story. Osiris is a great and peaceful ruler who is envied by Set who desires war and chaos. Set deceives Osiris by tricking him into fitting himself in a chest. Which as soon as he is in the chest, Set orders his men to nail it shut and seal it with melted lead. In the unit, it is mentioned Osiris dies almost immediately and I was shocked because how does someone die immediately by having the lid shut on them. So I came up with the conclusion that Ra saw what was taking place and saved Osiris by putting him in a coma-like sleep where he is consciously aware of what is going on around him. This always adds angst to the Osiris and his consort wife Isis. I played with the idea that Osiris had undying faith Isis would come and find him. Ultimately saving him. I'm a romantic that way!

A part of him knew something was wrong the moment he walked to the decorated chest Set had brought to the feast.

A part of him was hesitant, a slight uneasy weight settled itself in his stomach the moment he settled himself in the fitted chest. That uneasiness grew tenfold when Set's eyes, sparked with malicious intent, were the last thing he saw before the lid of the chest was slammed shut. Heard nails hammering and smelled melted lead.

This chest would be his death bed.

The panic creeped up his body: the tightness in his chest made it hard to breathe; sweat beaded on his heads and forehead; his hands started to tremble; and his vision swam.

He could feel his body start to slip into unconsciousness, then he heard a voice. Ra’s voice echoed in his mind, Sleep.

His body slowly went limp. First, the numbness started in his fingers and toes, then his arms and legs until he felt a weightlessness surrounding him. His eyelids drooped, and he sighed a name with his last breath, Isis.

= = =

He knows something is amiss when he awakens and he cannot open his eyes or move his body. His memories come swarming back: the feast, Set and the chest prison, then he is suddenly shaken by a noise of a woman wailing.

He can distinguish his name being cried out.

Isis.

Isis is mourning him and he can do nothing to comfort her.

He comes to the realization that if anyone could break him from his prison, it would be his consort, his wife.

He can be patient.

= = =

Though he is physical trapped in his decorated prison, he is aware of all the ongoings around him.

She is pregnant and he feels the earth rumble with joy when his son enters the world.

Time passes, and he knows the moment his son’s heart stops beating. His heart aches and the need to shed tears is unbearable, but his eyes remain dry and still. He can hear Isis’ cries. He wants to comfort her, but his body remains motionless. He feels the earth shake with relief when Ra revives his son.

He hears water around him, and there are no voices to be heard.

He knows the creatures who live around him in his chest prison, enveloped by a massive tree.

After months of silence, and then he hears her voice. Not from miles away, but next to him. She has found him.

She whispers to him, softly and full of sorrow. He realizes, she believes he is dead. She does not know that he is trapped within his body.

He feels the warmth of sun on his body, and he would breathe a sigh of relief if he could. Suddenly, the touch of Isis’ lips on his is as if he is being kissed by fire. He relishes the feeling until he realizes he feels tears dropping onto his face.

= = =

All he feels is blinding pain. His body cut into pieces, Set's laughter echoing in his ears while Isis' wails and anger resonates in his mind.

All the different senses from his severed body is bewildering: the scorching sun; the freezing coldness of the Nile; and the brush of flesh against his own from an animal.

His faith in his consort, his wife does not waver. He waits.

= = =

Years pass, he hears the murmurs of his son growing into a god. A strong god who is trained in battle to take the throne back from Set, the usurper. He hears nothing of his wife until he hears her weeping with Nepthys.

A voice breaks from the weeping. Ra's voice surrounds him, Awaken.

For the first time in decades, he draws breath into his lungs. His chest heaving with air, until he is crushed with the weight of his consort, his wife.

He holds her tight to him, and thanks Ra for his blessing.

He pushes his face between her neck and shoulder. Breathing in her perfumes from her hair and whispers only for her, “I knew you would find me, I knew all along.”

Tuesday, February 14, 2017

Reading Notes: Ancient Egypt, Part A

Creation:
     - being more powerful than the one who created you
     - Ra created his consort, how unsurprising
     - Seb + Nut = Osiris + Consort Isis... oh the incest.
     -  Ra could take on the human form and walk among men, centuries were years for him.

The Secret Name of Ra:
     - Ra a secret, names have power over their owners... like the Fair Folk
     - "He concealed it [Ra's name] in my heart so that no magician might ever know it and, knowing           it, be given power to work evil against me." Names have power!
     - He just keeps going on and on about how he created the earth and the heavens; I am bored of this        topic.
     - I am actually surprised that Isis actually healed Ra after he gave her is secret name.

Ra and Hathor:
     - Ra calling forth all the Gods makes me wonder what he has up his sleeves.
     - I am actually so surprised that Ra is asking Nu for advice. This would never have happened in            the Bible and it makes me giddy.
     - A great flood is a theme I remember hearing in many Native American and other creation tales, it        seems there might have been a great flood a long time ago.
     - I also like how heirs and the power struggles associated with them are not present here when Ra          mentions Osiris taking the throne and then Horus.
     - Hathor is lovely.
     - Oh my goodness. I like how Hathor, a women, is offered beer.

The Sun's Journey:
     - Slaughter atones for slaughter; Blood must have blood (The 100 reference)
     - We have a grudge against the reptiles of the world (Similar to the Bible's disdain for reptiles)
     -  Ra changes into 'different' beings depending on the time of day.
     - Anubis, for he is "Opener of the Ways."
     - "Whom he finds to be full of sin, he rejects, and these do the serpents fall upon, dragging them             away, while they utter loud and piercing cries of grief and agony, to be tortured and devoured;             lo! the wicked perish utterly." Lovely.

Osiris:
     - He brought peace to the land
     - Isis was a woman of exceeding great wisdom
     - I like how even Gods need a break, after Osiris put mankind back in order he took a vacation.
     - Isis  was stronger than Set (yes!), who regarded with jealous eyes the good works of his brother,          for his heart was full of evil and he loved warfare better than peace.
 
The Death of Osiris:
     - Set comes in under joyful pretenses but plots to kill Osiris.
     - Lead, the chest became a coffin. What did Osiris' soldiers or followers do? NOTHING
     - She loved him.
     - She set out on a quest to find Osiris' body.
     -  The queen became a fugitive
     - Scorpions.... giant scorpions aided the queen. They bit a child whose mother wailed, Isis felt pity        and revived the child, then the mother worshipped Isis.

The Journey of Isis:
     - Having a child on the run from Set is probably the worst possible timing.
     - How did Horus die? I mean, he was under the protection of Uazit, so I am confused on how he            was alone and dead.
     - A giant tree memorial
     - Apparently Egyptian gods do not decay... hopefully not since she kissed his dead body.
     - A Medusa feel to her eyes blinding the prince and killing him.
     - What was the purpose of cutting Osiris' body into 14 pieces?
   
King of the Dead:
     - Horus was trained his whole life to battle Set to take back the thrown.
     - Finally some divine intervention, Horus is the rightful king and given the throne.
     - From the text, it sounds like Isis and Nepthys weeped together over the death of Osiris, which I          find satisfying.
     - Osiris is alive! The burial ritual of wrapping the dead in linen is created!

The Wax Crocodile:
     - I read this story for the Feedback Project in Week four and I honestly do not want to reread it              again.
     - I am surprised though after seven days in the jaws of the crocodile and under water, the man did          not die?
   
The Green Jewel:
     - The girl said no to the king, and she was not executed... this delights me.


(Portrait of God Osiris and Isis from Web Source)

Bibliography: Ancient EgyptEgyptian Myth and Legend by Donald Mackenzie





Sunday, February 12, 2017

Feedback Focus: Techniques

Techniques



(16700- Legend of Britomart from Web Source.)

Reading out loud:
1. The Wax Crocodile; The King, The Falcon, and the Drinking Cup; Why Dog and Cat are Enemies
  • I did not like reading aloud. I do believe I have enough awareness of the story to write detailed comments, but I still do not like reading aloud. Reading out loud feels like it is breaking a barrier, the quietness of reading allows me to immerse myself in the story. Throughout reading the stories, I caught myself multiple times reading out loud, but by the middle of the story, I would unconsciously stop reading out loud. 
    • I have to say The King, The Falcon, and The Drinking Cup is an awful, sad story; it automatically put a pit in my stomach. I greatly dislike stories like this. I whole-heartedly believe stories should have a somewhat happy ending because the world is shitty enough. I confess, I usually skip stories like this one because I have enough negativity in my own life that I do not want to feel worse by reading stories like this one. 
Copy-and-Delete:

2. What Makes The Lightning
  • I have a similar technique for making notes, but I do not copy and paste the text into another document and then delete each paragraph. I simply have two tabs open and jot notes down when something interests or surprises me. I still like my technique better since it is less work and saves time rather than opening up more tabs. 
Use a Timer:

3. What The Heart Desires
  • I loved it! The story was wonderful, I actually read it twice in the 10 minutes I did have. However, I do not think the timer technique is for me. I still originally like my technique. This technique may not have worked for me since I enjoyed the story so much I was not bothered at the idea to read it again. 

My favorite story was What the Heart Desires, it has strong women and I like the back story Glauce has with the princess' grandmother. 

Thursday, February 9, 2017

Week 4 Storytelling: Wolves



(Gray wolves from EarthSky.)

There was once a little girl who was a princess, and her family's crest was that of wolves. Every evening her mother and sisters took her to the woods to sing with the wolves. The wolves accepted their songs and protected them through the night.

Now the kingdom was prosperous and was envied by many neighboring kingdoms. There was one in particular with sinister plots to over throw the kingdom.  The neighboring king was jealous of the good fortune of the Good King and soon plotted against him when the kingdoms would meet. He met them with false pretenses: "I am fortune and glad to be here for this grand meeting of kings."

The Good King did not suspect anything malicious and after hours of celebrating the union many of men fell victim to the sweet alcohol of the Good King while the Envious King and his men waited for the opportune time to strike.

The little princess enjoyed the party and could hear the wolves sing in the night, enjoying their comrades joy. The little princess did not suspect anything when the Envious King stood and the all became quiet. The Envious King saw his chance when many of the men were drunk and unable to fight against his men. He commanded his men: “Now while they are drunk, they shall fall to my rule and their family slaughtered. Kill them!"

Her mother said nothing as the Envious King's men started murdering the neighboring kingdom's kings and families, she simply shoved her daughter under the table and told her to run: "Run my daughter. Run to the wolves."

She made her slow way out of the parlor, but she did not make it out to the woods before she was caught by the Envious King himself. 

A princess shall become a peasant, and you shall roam the earth without the luxury of your previous life.

The Envious King was cruel and held her before her father, mother and her sisters as they were killed brutally by the Envious Kings swordsmen. She cried as she saw her mother and sister fall to the ground lifeless.

The parlor was red with blood, and now the wolves howled with sorrow at their companion’s deaths.

The Envious King thought it irony the princess would soon meet her end at the crest animal of her house.  He could saw the golden eyes watching from the forest as the girl stumbled into it. He heard the wolves abrupt howling and signaled the death of the Good Kings heir.


Many years past, and the Envious King soon became unsatisfied and envious of other kingdoms. He planned to siege the other kingdom at dawn before the neighbor king could prepare for an attack, but when he opened the gates he was surprised when four dozen wolves were standing watching the Envious King and his army. A greater surprise came when a woman entered from the forest and her howl commanded the wolves to surge forward and his men were devoured one by one. 

The Envious King was the only man left in the palace. He opened his eyes to see the woman standing over him. She opened her mouth and spoke: "You threw me to the wolves, and I came back as their alpha."

Author's Note: I read the Persian fairytales translated by David and Emily Lorimer: the themes were revenge and disguises plus the use of wolves. I wanted to incorporate those themes in my story. I also tried to write my story using the Persian writing style, I do not think I did well. I most likely will not use this style again.  


Tuesday, February 7, 2017

Reading Notes: Persian, Part B



Fayiz and the Peri Wife:
- A married man, who was true-hearted and honest, and very handsome (how long will this last?).
- Knowing the identity of your spouse is on a need-to-know basis: trick!
- She willingly suspects her human husband to be unfaithful while cursing him to have sorrows for the rest of his life if he is unfaithful to only her... 
- This story reminds me of Psyche and Cupid's love palace in the beginning of the story, but the Peri actually kept her vowels and never let her human husband see her or their sons again.

The Hemp-Smoker's Dream:
- A dream story. 
- Demanding the king's daughter with only a handful of men... while a king has an army.
- Seventy pots of ash, not the soup.
- The arrow went all the way from China to under the chenar tree to the west.
-  This was an interesting story.

The Story of the Wolf-Bride:
- You cannot cheat death or fate.

The Man Who Went to Wake His Luck:
- The embodiment of one's luck
- A woman king! and then the reason the people will not obey her is ... because she's a woman. Great.
- The wolf ate him! He forgot to ask his Luck for his own fortune, and walked away from people who would have given him his fortune.

Tortoise Bowl-On-The-Back and the Fox:
- This story is similar to the Fox and the Hare who race each other.
- But the tortoise is smart than the fox this time around.

The Shepherd Who Found Treasure:
- The green fly is the soul..
- an iron bridge, great abyss, white water
- jars of gold/jewels are used many times throughout a majority of the Persian stories

The Merchant and the Saffron:
- fortune man soon turned into a man with nothing.
- good fortune will return (luck will reawaken) if you are fortunate to others

Shah Abbas and the Poor Mother:
- I am so tired of men being the main character of stories. 
- Well, I suppose this man is decent, but the others are not.
- I am glad that the woman and the children were able to be taken care of by the Shah while the Darogha and the Baker were killed for their deceit!

The Apparition of the Prophet Khizr:
- "I made such and such an arrangement with the King, and now what harm will it be if I, a single individual, die? You at any rate will love on in comfort." This does not happen often. 
- Baker's are common theme in Persian stories
- I am refreshed that the King kept the fourth Wazir who spoke of mercy and generosity.

The Story of the Baker and the Grateful Fish:
- Those who you are generous to may show you kindness later in life.
- a Lot of these stories are about revenge and disguises. I will probably write my story based on the themes presented in the Persian stories.


Bibliography: Persian Tales, translated by D.L.R. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer

Image: Fish by Jeremy Cai from UnSplash

Reading Notes: Persian, Part A

"Once upon a time there was a time when there was no one but God... And now my story has come to an end, but the sparrow never got home."

The Wolf and the Goat:
- Four children: Alil, Balil, Ginger Stick and Black Eyes
- The animals possess human qualities and are described as doing human actions: throwing, carrying and climbed.
- The topic of the wolf's teeth being pulled never came back in the story and the sparrow was never mentioned in the beginning of the story, so I am confused on why those scenes were important to the story.

The City of Nothing in the World:
- This little girl is a pathological liar...
- I am so confused on what is going on in this story. Maybe if I had previous knowledge of the mythology and cultural meanings I would understand, but I have no idea what this means. The sparrow was mentioned again, so I am beginning to think it is a metaphor.

Susku and Mushu:
- Mushu is the mouse and Susku is the beetle.
- They have human characteristics.
- They are getting married. You'll sleep in your arms and I'll beat you with my tail.
- The human and the mouse converse easily.
- ladders of gold
- Instead of being burned to death making her ash soup, she drowned.
- Ashes symbolism
- Everyone is sad, and each are showing sadness in their own way.
- Oh my, that was intense. Why did the farmer feel compelled to spear himself?
-  Why is this happening?

The Boy Who Became a Bulbul:
- "'You two ought to lay a wager to-day and agree that whichever of you collects the more firewood should cut off the other one's head.' The father and son agreed to do this." - WHAT, WHAT, WHAT!!! WHY?
- The boy collected more, and his father stole some of his boy's stash...
- THE FATHER AND STEP-MOTHER ARE CANNIBALS
- The little girl is the only sensible one.
- The little boy turned into a bird and took revenge on the evil step-mother and father then gave his sister sweets.
- I like this story. It is the only story that makes sense so far!

The Wolf-Aunt: (oh my goodness, werewolves)
- And of course she the antagonist of the tale.
- such and such is a way of telling if people are telling half truths or just straight lying.
- "Go and carry this to your aunt." When the child reached her aunt's door she peeped in before entering and saw her father's sister had turned into a wolf and was eating a man." - Very Little Red Riding Hood.
- Faith in your spouse is key to survival.

Nim Tanak, or Half-Boy:
- Magical apples representing the bodies of the babies, since one of the mothers ate only half of the apple she resulted in half a boy.
- The boy was still allowed to live at the palace, but never entered is father's presence.
- THE DAUGHTER WAS HUNTING WITH HER BROTHERS
- but she became a damsel...
- I understand that the two other brothers were not going o save their sister, but Nim Tanak was and I understand the differences in eating and drinking habits played a role in determining the Div's victory and defeat, but I do not understand how.

Muhammad Tirandaz, The Archer:
- I wish I was as lucky as Muhammad.
- I just do not understand why they did not ask him to perform or provide evidence of his feats.

The Praying Baker:

- Lets see if this baker is sincere in his prayers, if he's not I will kill him. The employed: try to get the ring back. If he succeed, he will be reward. If he loses, he's be decapitated. WHAT
- The baker was sincere and it's a happy ending!

The Sad Tale of the Mouse's Tail: 

- This mouse is having a hard time. I think if it was not a cumulative story, the mouse would have her tail sewn on faster. I think when the mouse tells the others what she is doing for the other characters in the story, they think they can get something for themselves.

Bibliography: Persian Tales translated by David Lorimer and Emily Lorimer.

Image: Red Whiskered Bulbuls from Web Source

Sunday, February 5, 2017

Famous Last Words: Strong Women



(GettyImages/WireImage Photo by Kevin Mazur; Web Source.)

My reading for this week: Overall, my reading was not very interesting. I had time to do both my readings, but I forgot to do a declaration for Part B. The underlying themes the stories used allowed me to create my own stories. I know after reading the Adam and Eve unit I should read topics I am not aware of for the sake of my sanity. I was raised in a Southern Baptist household and I am not a religious person; some of the oppressive themes of the Bible concerning Eve was frustrating for me. Even though I grew up in a Christian home, my mother is a strong woman, but my parents equally share the responsibilities - they both 'wore the pants' in the relationship. 

Your best writing for this week: In my opinion, the writing I did in this class if the best writing because I enjoyed writing the stories more than I liked writing case studies and critical analyses. I have not had any issues in writer's block (knock on wood). I used a writing style similar to the first two stories I wrote.

Other people's writing: During the project feedback assignment, I found two stories I enjoyed reading. I laughed, squealed, shouted with triumph during some of the scenes in one of the stories. Both stories showcased strong female characters which I think is a theme of mine, a crucial aspect for me. One of the writing styles was delicate and vivid in its imagery while the other was action packed and quick paced. They were different styles, but they consisted of strong females which the units lacked. I think it is admirable for someone to rewrite the stories or create new ones involving strong women.

Your other classes: My other courses are frantic and busy. There are no connections I can find within this mythology course. I think in my Digital Design course I could pull artistic themes into my adobe designs. Also, I might be able to pull in some mythology themes later into my Capstone class.

Outside of school: I went to a play called Galileo’s Torch on Friday night. It depicted Galileo’s life and how the church and religion destroyed his life. The lighting and the actors did well with what they were given considering the author of the play was a scientist and could not correctly portray human emotion well. I also was roped into watching a classic Bollywood movie called Kuch Kuch Hota Hai which means something happens in English. It’s a stereotypical Bollywood movie: very overdramatic and bright colors, but it was fun to watch. The only thing I did not like about the movie was the instances where the male love interest humiliated the love interest, but this made her fall more in love with him.  My Indian friend says this is very common in Bollywood movies. Other than that, I enjoyed the movie and will most likely watch another Bollywood movie.

Next week: I have an exam and a meeting on Monday plus Part A of the reading for this class. I plan to finish Part B and the Storytelling on Tuesday as well as another assignment due on Tuesday. Wednesday I plan on working with extra credit for this class. I have a two-day career fair on Friday and Saturday I am attending for Gaylord College. Plus many more meetings.